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Just giving you guys the "Look" of it I guess. . .? The white silhouette on black shirt that is.
I like what you have going here, but here's some ideas:
1: that should be on the back
2: The front should have the logo for FR and Melty where the right breast pocket would be.
3: The left side should have the character related Engrish-text going vertically down it. In Ryougi's case it would be:
"Girl with the Eyes of Direct Death. The capacity of the Root of all Creation.
The man in town that doesn't have concerning at all with Misakicho.
It isn't certain whether she herself is the dream called to whether herself is no persons or whether
this stage is the dream she sees."
Or if you prefer a non engrish version:
"Girl with the Eyes of Direct Death. The capacity of the Root of all Creation.
The one in town that isn't related at all to Misakicho.
It isn't certain whether she is the dream they were called to. If she is no one
or if this stage is the dream she sees."