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Misaki Town Bakery => Akiha's Tea Room => : Curbeh April 05, 2010, 08:15:15 PM
When's Melty on Steam?
ahaha that's no--wait, what?
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I see something fly
"Not the stick, Gootecks!"
A fight stick goes by
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Nero's Jumping C
Is incredibly gay so
Fucking cut it out
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Melty Blood is fun
We mash 2a quite a bit
It is very fun
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I see something fly
"Not the stick, Gootecks!"
A fight stick goes by
Nothing says "great haiku thread" like a non-haiku in the first post.
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No new posts are here
Bitches don't know 'bout my Haikus
Imagination?
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Akiha's flat chest
along with her modest dress
tsundere is the best
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Would one mind
Posting the ways
Of the Haiku?
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Would one mind
Posting the ways
Of the Haiku?
The first verse count five,
then seven syllables here,
and then five again.
Kohaku's bright mind
has made excellent plants but,
where do they come from?
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That is simple, sir.
Under Kohaku's apron
are where the plants are.
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All you scrubs are hype
Melty is going to be
at Evo this year.
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the love of my life
eyes like two e.x. counters
fuujo kohaku
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the love of my life
eyes like two e.x. counters
fuujo kohaku
laughing my ass off
i can't think of anything else
dicks dicks dicks dicks dicks
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Would one mind
Posting the ways
Of the Haiku?
The first verse count five,
then seven syllables here,
and then five again.
Kohaku's bright mind
has made excellent plants but,
where do they come from?
I humbly thank thee
For so clearing that question
Long plaguing my mind.
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Haiku plagued your mind?
I'm scared to think of what else
Could be hiding there.
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A mourning dove feeds
In a marijuana bush
And sings a high coo
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Orb Fortress of Lame
There was no way to get in
Now she is pure trash
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I don't like haikus
I don't feel like writing one
But then what is this?
MINDFUCK HAIKU!!
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This chair's an eyesore.
This chair. This chair. This chair this
chair this chair this chair!!!!!!!!!
Two can play that game, sir.
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I can make noises
With my hand and wrist
flap flap flap flap :fap: :fap: :fap:
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Suddenly above
The white flash foreshadows pain
Somerheat...SUCCESS!
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Suddenly above
The white flash foreshadows pain
Somerheat...SUCCESS!
ON BLAST version:
Suddley above
The white flash foreshadows pain
WHAT? Wake up air throw?!
new:
Backstep, jump, shield, dodge
None of this is working, fool
Block on wake up, please
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Hisui in half moon
I play you all by myself
I will be da best~
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Chest flat, stockings high
Land in a corner, meter full
See red, no escape.
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Chest flat, stockings high
I stopped reading here
Feel a boner comin on
Now im gonna fap :fap: :fap: :fap:
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It's okay to fap.
Akiha might be flat but
How it's used, that counts.
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This shit is mad lame. Try this haiku shit in chat, you damn dirty apes.
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You can't force us to.
Quit hatin' on us, nigga.
Show us some respect.
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If a sentence just
has seventeen syllables,
is it a haiku?
:psyduck:
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Melty Blood AACC at SBO
Haters are gonna hate this
Sux for them, Get Hype!!!
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Hype I got indeed
In evo and sbo Melty is
What an awesome year
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This shit is mad lame. Try this haiku shit in chat, you damn dirty apes.
I see what you did
You are so very clever
Oh sauce of loli
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Yubei and Funky
Have some very strange ways of
Making their words fit.
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Yubel's did not fit
Second line had at least nine
It was almost close
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This shit is mad lame. Try this haiku shit in chat, you damn dirty apes.
I see what you did
You are so very clever
Oh sauce of loli
I'm glad someone did. =>
I admire wittiness, which I often lack. On occasion though, I sometimes surprise myself. Those days I feel great.
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I caught it too, I just decided not to post it. :P
Second line had at least nine
You're a poet and didn't know it.
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Second line had at least nine
wow i didn't even notice ;D
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Yubei still fails it
Five-seven-five, that's the rule
Now go fix it, man!
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Melty Blood AACC at SBO
Haters are gonna hate this
Sux for them, Get Hype!!!
tried fixing this but if not correct i will retire from writing haikus :psyduck:
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Melty Blood AACC at SBO
Haters are gonna hate this
Sux for them, Get Hype!!!
tried fixing this but if not correct i will retire from writing haikus :psyduck:
This is very close
But it is not by too much
line one minus one
Five syllables here
This one gets more at seven
and back down to five
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A-A-C-C, huh?
How does one say this in five?
Same for S-BO, too.
(Seriously. I can't think of any way to pronounce AACC other than letter-by-letter, and even if you slur "SBO" to "sboh" it sounds fugly.)
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A-A-C-C, huh?
How does one say this in five?
Same for S-BO, too.
(Seriously. I can't think of any way to pronounce AACC other than letter-by-letter, and even if you slur "SBO" to "sboh" it sounds fugly.)
Cant be perfect ::)was writing that semi-haiku in a rush so i couldn't actually proofread and edit. That's why i moved on to epic poems and ballads :P
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Hey Yubelphoenix
Write us a god damn ballad
Dat be cool as shit
teehee
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When I got the time
Too Busy with my finals
Ugh I hate college.
P.S. Cornix and Dark Pulse. flame me all u want if i didnt get it rite this time :bleh:
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I applaud you sir
You finally got it right
AACC can just be ACK
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YubelPheonix learns
Now hes writin like a pro
Lets all have a contest
ho ho a haiku challenge
BY THE WAY finally is three syllables
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Alright so it is
I guess I have to change it
the challenge seems fun
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Damn Shit just got real
We got us a challenge
We got corrections!!!
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Yeah, I like this thread
A contest will keep it fun
All we needs some rules ;D
People can enter
We set up a little poll
Everyone will vote
We will all have lulz
I think we'll all have some fun
We should get on this
:psyduck: triple haiku?
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Yubel not again!
You were doing oh so well
Second needs one more
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Oh well, hate syllables
Ha, Too Tired to edit
About too knockout :P
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sorry Yubel
syl-la-bles :'( the irony
Ha-ha dont worry
Its not that big of a deal
Syllables do suck
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Yeah, I like this thread
A contest will keep it fun
All we needs some rules ;D
People can enter
We set up a little poll
Everyone will vote
We will all have lulz
I think we'll all have some fun
We should get on this
I think I'll play too.
Winning this will be easy.
I'm pro at word games.
Now list down your rules,
Then we can start this game up.
However, you'll see...
I'm telling you now,
Since you guys started this, don't
Go crying later.
And while we're at it,
My lines hold a hidden code.
Enigma at work.
:psyduck: triple haiku?
I'll see your triple,
and then I'll raise you two more.
A five-part haiku. :slowpoke:
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I'm so sorry sir
You will never win my game
I say, fuck your code
Word games are my thing
No one can compete with me
I wont allow it
We may not like it
But we must work together
Two bitter rivals
We need sets of rules
I cant think of them myself
I might need some help
I think well do it
Our differences aside
This thread will not stop
It will never end
never, ever, ever no
I say, it will not
And I must say this
I will see your five poems
And i'll raise you two
:slowpoke:
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You folks don't get it.
It's not the volume, it's the
quality that counts.
Now, I could school you
all day long on how to write
haiku, but no thanks.
See, speaking like this
takes some time and effort so
you had best get it.
But all you two are
focused on is "quantity!"
You both make me laugh.
It's not quantity.
It's quality. Always was.
Numbers are nothing.
Anyone can write
sheer numbers of haiku, but
it don't mean you should.
Frankly, that contest
makes it seem like you two have
nothing else to do.
It's saturday night.
You should be out partying
or playing Melty.
Instead, here you are
sitting at the PC and
thinking of dumb rhymes.
So as I close this,
facepalming my head at it,
I shall say one thing.
It is quality.
That is what always counts most,
Eleven aside.
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Well, I guess you win
This will be my last haiku
I'll see you in hell
I must say farewell
I commend you my brother
I am at a loss
My life was so short
This sad life as a poet
I knew it would end
Im sad you are right
It IS about quality
I just didnt know
Yea im sitting here
I have no melty to play
No tv to watch
No close friends to call
No family to hang with
No bed to sleep in
This took a sad turn
It took a turn for the worst
Depression sets in
Sleep will be needed
A recollection of thoughts
One small chance to rest
But dont sit judging us
Dont get on your high horse just yet
You just wait and see
About quality
One day you will see defeat
You just sit and wait
Ill be showing you
We will all be showing you
You shall be prepared
Now ill take my leave
Sorry to bore you with this
Hope you stayed awake
I know well be friends
The man who knows his words well
The man with no fail
This has been so fun
But you need to remember
How I wrote fourteen
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@Kiiroe
(judging from your first verse, you found my code. Good job, you get a +heat)
Your lines kinda suck.
Normal flow, control, style
Need to work on those.
You don't just add words
So you hit syllable count.
It makes them sound dumb.
Your line's poetic,
Make them flow like you're talking
And then try again.
@ Dark Pulse
As for quality,
Take a look at my last post
I am trash talking.
Typical for games,
Talk trash to your opponents
Then beat them senseless.
(did you find my hidden message in my last post? read it one more time)
That's what hype's about.
And if I wanted to rhyme,
Trust me, I've got time.
I spend my days off
Playing Touhou games mostly
or Evo training.
Of course anyone
Can write lines with metered verse,
It's not all that hard.
What should be looked at
Is if they sound natural
As if they're spoken.
Take this post of mine,
This would fit normally
In a paragraph.
You see the verses
Because I'm spacing the lines,
But say I didn't...
then it would end up looking much more like a post. Just like Loli said, "This shit is mad lame". You're not proving anything by quantity lines. It's rather doubtful that you could 'school me' on verse, please don't waste your time. I've gone to college and I've minored in English; my focus was prose. But what I wanted was to take some classes on creative writing. While they did have some, there were a lot of pre-reqs...I really hate those. English 120 was a real waste of my time and same with 212, and then they cancelled the creative writing class. I had to take prose. :emo:
Now after all that, I've got myself a minor but it does nothing for my current job. I manage a sushi bar, schooling was useless; don't have a major and I stopped taking classes. Gen Ed classes suck. I do like to write, and prose is easy to do, and thus...my day off. After all my years, metered verses and haiku are easy to write. Oh, and FYI, metered verses and haiku are two different things. This thread is metered while haiku deals with seasons of nature and stuff. Oh, and just for fun, I made this entire post at 5-7-5. Break them up and see, I really don't care about quantity at all, but if you're counting then I have no idea how many I wrote. :toot:
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I see your no joke
I admit im no poet
I see that im lame
I am just so bored
Ive got no melty to play
I've had a bad day :/
There was a meeting
I was GONNA play melty
But I couldnt go :(
Ill work on this stuff
So I can come and "school" you
As Dark Pulse has said
All of us be friends
Yes, we should all get along
Even though inside
We'll whisper and plot
Soon the backstabbing will start
You will be decieved
So just watch your back
You'll never know whose a friend
This thread is not safe
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I am just so bored
Ive got no melty to play
A bad day ive had :/
Even though I say Melty training for Evo, my PS2 broke, so I sit all day playing Touhou games instead and watching YouTube. It's always Youmu that kills my 1cc run playing PCB. Marisa is fat in MoF and she cant micro graze at all...It is frustrating, I'm trying to put all the endings up online. Can't clear PCB, MoF Marisa's fat, and 12 is too hard. :emo: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qIVryp8_U80
You should play Touhou, danmaku lolis are win and so's the music. The games are real fun. A great way to spend a day... At least I think so. Oh and also with PoFV, you can get the netplay feature. This will let you go and play with others online...of course with some lag. Or for the fighters, Hisoutensoku also has a netplay game. Dunno...just something that I do to spend the time without PS2. Let me promote my danmaku lolis since I like Touhou a lot.
This thread is not safe
EDIT: I lol'd
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what...
WHAT!!!
That looks so god damn hard
but for some reason... Im compelled to try :psyduck:
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I've gone to college and I've minored in English; my focus was prose. But what I wanted was to take some classes on creative writing. While they did have some, there were a lot of pre-reqs...I really hate those. English 120 was a real waste of my time and same with 212, and then they cancelled the creative writing class. I had to take prose. :emo:
Now after all that, I've got myself a minor but it does nothing for my current job. I manage a sushi bar, schooling was useless; don't have a major and I stopped taking classes. Gen Ed classes suck. I do like to write, and prose is easy to do, and thus...my day off. After all my years, metered verses and haiku are easy to write. Oh, and FYI, metered verses and haiku are two different things. This thread is metered while haiku deals with seasons of nature and stuff. Oh, and just for fun, I made this entire post at 5-7-5. Break them up and see, I really don't care about quantity at all, but if you're counting then I have no idea how many I wrote. :toot:
Oh, I go to college now, and I took a lot of classes in English. Including creative writing, and I've got the poetry, flash fiction, and short stories to prove it. I'm working on a Bachelor's degree now, and I think I have a fairly more verbose vocabulary than most people. Minors really don't mean jack once you have more than an Associate's Degree, anyway.
Does it mean I could school you? Maybe not; it was a bit presumptuous of me. But I'd say I got a good shot of being at least equal.
And yes, I know the distinction between metered verses and Haiku, but unarguably this thread has never been about Haikus, but metered verses. Not to mention "Metered Verses" being much harder to stuff in since that's four syllables.
Also, yes, I did find your hidden message. Very clever. To that, I have to say...
(http://aidenvdh.rootnode.net/fun_gallery/imgs/1190669926051.jpg)
If that isn't hint enough, then I'll spell it out, but I think that should suffice. Since I always appreciate that +HEAT. :P
Anyway, I could try (and easily top) Kiiroe's 14, but I'm beyond caring. Plus the last thing this thread needs is posts that contain 30+ 5-7-5 metered verse posts. Let's keep them short, like 1-3 per post, kids. Reading those longer ones suck, to be honest.
I have writing to return to, anyway. One month has produced an 80,000 word, 2/3 complete fanfic. It might even show up here, sometime. As it is Melty/Tsuki related...
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Shut up faggots
This here is a haiku thread
Now back on topic
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No, it's metered verse. There's no nature in these posts. Add some leaves for that.
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I am just so bored
Ive got no melty to play
A bad day ive had :/
Even though I say Melty training for Evo, my PS2 broke, so I sit all day playing Touhou games instead and watching YouTube. It's always Youmu that kills my 1cc run playing PCB. Marisa is fat in MoF and she cant micro graze at all...It is frustrating since I am trying to put all the endings up online. Can't clear PCB, MoF Marisa's fat, and 12 is too hard. :emo: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qIVryp8_U80
You should play Touhou, danmaku lolis are win and so's the music. The games are real fun. A great way to spend a day... At least I think so. Oh and also with PoFV, you can get the netplay feature. This will let you go and play with others online...of course with some lag. Or for the fighters, Hisoutensoku also has a netplay game. Dunno...just something that I do to spend the time without PS2. Let me promote my danmaku lolis since I like Touhou a lot.
I like those games too. Funny you linked that ending cuz 6 is my fave. I play Reimu B. Marisa's too fast for me, but I like her strength.
The new games suck though. I miss traditional bombs and stage restarts blow.
Oh, and Dark Pulse - Leaves. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NYYWp7Pa7s)
Seriously though, I have a question for you: What's up with this post? (http://www.meltybread.com/forums/akiha%27s-tea-room/haiku-topic/msg71131/#msg71131) Shin's post was metered, even when he stopped spacing. Yours seemed like plain talk. If you're his equal, then you should be proving it. Haiku at all times!
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Those leaves were quite nice. Very nice, I must admit. Now it's a Haiku.
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Touhou 6-8 really did it for me. I made my current stick because of those games.
Shut up faggots
This here is a haiku thread
Now back on topic
Derailed haiku thread,
he hit the nail on the head.
Let's add to haiku,
the limerick too,
I wonder what will be said?
... (go H-Kohaku)
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I'll have you know, couch - though I don't space like haiku, my posts are in step. My style is subtle, but test them out and you'll see. My prose is legit.
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I am just so bored
Ive got no melty to play
A bad day ive had :/
Even though I say Melty training for Evo, my PS2 broke, so I sit all day playing Touhou games instead and watching YouTube. It's always Youmu that kills my 1cc run playing PCB. Marisa is fat in MoF and she cant micro graze at all...It is frustrating since I am trying to put all the endings up online. Can't clear PCB, MoF Marisa's fat, and 12 is too hard. :emo: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qIVryp8_U80
You should play Touhou, danmaku lolis are win and so's the music. The games are real fun. A great way to spend a day... At least I think so. Oh and also with PoFV, you can get the netplay feature. This will let you go and play with others online...of course with some lag. Or for the fighters, Hisoutensoku also has a netplay game. Dunno...just something that I do to spend the time without PS2. Let me promote my danmaku lolis since I like Touhou a lot.
I like those games too. Funny you linked that ending cuz 6 is my fave. I play Reimu B. Marisa's too fast for me, but I like her strength.
The new games suck though. I miss traditional bombs and stage restarts blow.
Oh, and Dark Pulse - Leaves. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NYYWp7Pa7s)
Seriously though, I have a question for you: What's up with this post? (http://www.meltybread.com/forums/akiha%27s-tea-room/haiku-topic/msg71131/#msg71131) Shin's post was metered, even when he stopped spacing. Yours seemed like plain talk. If you're his equal, then you should be proving it. Haiku at all times!
Ha! Nice to see that. I prefer Reimu B too, strong but not too fast. As it is, the only one I have cleared in full would be Touhou 6. Working on the rest, but it is taking some time, are you good at them? Touhous 6-8 are among the best Touhous, but 10 has Aya.
So, what do you mean by this thread being derailed? Look again closely. Loli has his post metered in 5-7-5, and then look at mine. Every single one of my posts within this thread are all metered too. The last one as well (except for the edit part) was metered correct. Same goes for this post, me and Loli are following the topic rules.
Would it be better
If I spaced out every line
In this format here?
As I was saying,
A true metered post is one
Where you sound normal.
Not unnatural
Nor awkward sounding either,
But everything flows.
Or would you rather
That I wrote a real haiku
Instead of lecture?
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Nighttime, a full moon
Cold wind blows, the city sleeps
Dawn breaks, birds chirping
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What's that? Too boring?
Well that was a REAL haiku
Not this metered talk.
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Shut up faggots
This here is a haiku thread
Now back on topic
I agreed with him
on the post prior to his.
(picked this thread up late)
But also notice,
it was a jab at myself.
I broke the rules too.
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Missing my plus-heat
Makes Dark Pulse quite very sad
Like kittens in trees.
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Ha! Nice to see that. I prefer Reimu B too, strong but not too fast. As it is, the only one I have cleared in full would be Touhou 6. Working on the rest, but it is taking some time, are you good at them? Touhous 6-8 are among the best Touhous, but 10 has Aya.
I'm no lunatic, but I hard cleared 6-8. This was in the past. I haven't played since...probably one or two years? My skills must have dulled. Eleven's demo, I think, was the last I played. It was good and bad. I liked some of it (namely the sub characters), yet it still fell short. The new engine's wack. Ever since Mountain of Faith, I lost interest. Sorry for Aya, but there's still Shoot the Bullet. Double Spoiler, too.
Nighttime, a full moon
Cold wind blows, the city sleeps
Dawn breaks, birds chirping
Hey, where's all the leaves? Sounds to me like you're a hack! Go back to Type Moon. :V
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Dark Pulse is a fag
He posts in like every thread
Over and over
Look at his Profile
He joined in February
His post count is huge
Nah, I'm just kidding
Dark Pulse is pretty okay
I'm just an asshole
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My fellow asshole,
I fully understand you,
So it's all good, sir.
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I've an idea,
How about we play a game
Using metered verse.
I will write a verse
Then the next person follows
Up with another.
But don't end your verse
With a sentence. It will go
Something like this.
So I guess I'll start. I've got a really big question to ask. What is
a man? A miserable pile of secrets. But enough talk, have
This pokeball. This
Device will help you capture
Wild pokemon.
And thus Anon2
Broke this game by ending with
A sentence. That jerk.
You can space your lines
Or you can leave it open.
But follow the rules.
Your verse must still be
Metered in 5-7-5
And must end open.
Basically this game
Will keep on going until
We hit a moron.
What do you guys say,
Do you want to try this out?
Who wants to start this?
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Sounds like tons of fun
Should just start us off there sir
Honour is all yours
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I had something here.
It would fit in with above,
but let S-M start.
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Tohno is the man
He :psyduck: s all the women
How does he manage
Sion is strange
Weird,How does her hat stay on
None, will ever Know
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SM's game sounds fun
My haikus suck royal ass
I'm prepared to lose
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That game does sound fun
Is SM gonna start it?
He betta get on dat.
It's kinda funny
Everyone is in college
Im still in high school
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You damn kids today.
Back in my day, we had no
easy school shootings.
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Sure, the game sounds fun, but someone could troll with ease. What would you do then? Ignore all "end" posts?
I'll stick to just conversing. It's more fun to me.
By the way, you guys, calling him SM sounds weird like some bondage shit. In that nickname thread, he mentioned something about being called just Shin.
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For some reason now, I'm inspired to write this real haiku (with leaves!):
Autumn, a warm breeze
silent street, dance with the leaves
a speeding car wins
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Haha bondage shit
Sexy haiku by the way
Sigh, i'm so damn bored
Ovaltine's so good
This cup that im drinking from
It makes silly sounds
:slowpoke:
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Haha bondage shit
Sexy haiku by the way
Sigh, i'm so damn bored
A compliment? Thanks. =>
Try hopping in melty chat. It's entertaining.
What is your sig from? Though, talking about it here might prove to be hard.
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Not sure on my sig
It's a random pic off \a\
It's pretty funny
I wish that i knew
If I find out what its from
I'll be sure to tell
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Atmosphere floating
Cigarette ash burning
The cat is gloating.
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On a moonlit night
One can walk accompanied
by one's inner self.
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On a moonlit night
One can always have a girl
More fun in her self
Or maybe a guy
If one is inclined to such
have fun in your self.
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That game does sound fun
Is SM gonna start it?
He betta get on dat.
Sry, was at work. I work almost everyday going 10 till 10 and the restaurant is full all the fricken' time...no time to write shit.
I was wondering who you were talking about with that SM name...I didn't realize that you were talking 'bout me. Feels kinda dirty... :-\ Read the nickname thread (http://www.meltybread.com/forums/sacchin-toast/your-nickname's-origin/msg67201/#msg67201), the nickname I use is "Shin", so please call me that. :blah:
I don't like my game, trolling is way too easy...let's do something else. I suggested that around 5 in the morning, I was damn tired...didn't think about the possibility that someone would troll it. I have to admit, if I knew this game was being played, I'd troll it. Heh, especially BECAUSE it is a word game, I'd be trolling it.
And, in other news, what the hell is the meaning of this screwed up count (http://www.meltybread.com/forums/akiha's-tea-room/haiku-topic/msg71204/#msg71204)? Your first line's a wreck. Go fix that shit up right now. I'm ashamed of you. :slowpoke:
While you're in this thread, even if just conversing, don't mess up your count.
I hear the sound of danmaku lolis calling. Here's one for the road...
I'm inspired to write this real haiku (with leaves!):
Leaves burn really strong
In my brand new fire pit...
Screw your leaves, Loli.
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See how a leaf blows
I wish I could be like that
But that would be gay
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And, in other news, what the hell is the meaning of this screwed up count (http://www.meltybread.com/forums/akiha's-tea-room/haiku-topic/msg71204/#msg71204)? Your first line's a wreck. Go fix that shit up right now.
Autumn, a warm breeze
silent street, dance with the leaves
a speeding car wins
By my count, it's five.
Shin forgot how to count, eh?
Happens to us all.
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And, in other news, what the hell is the meaning of this screwed up count (http://www.meltybread.com/forums/akiha's-tea-room/haiku-topic/msg71204/#msg71204)? Your first line's a wreck. Go fix that shit up right now.
Autumn, a warm breeze
silent street, dance with the leaves
a speeding car wins
By my count, it's five.
Shin forgot how to count, eh?
Happens to us all.
What the hell are you talking about? That is not the first line he wrote.
While you're in this thread, even if just conversing, don't mess up your count.
Seriously though, I have a question for you: What's up with this post? (http://www.meltybread.com/forums/akiha%27s-tea-room/haiku-topic/msg71131/#msg71131) Shin's post was metered, even when he stopped spacing. Yours seemed like plain talk. If you're his equal, then you should be proving it. Haiku at all times!
Oh, and just for fun, I made this entire post at 5-7-5.
Every single one of my posts within this thread are all metered too.
Same goes for this post, me and Loli are following the topic rules.
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For some reason just now, I'm inspired to write this real haiku (with leaves!):
Autumn, a warm breeze
silent street, dance with the leaves
a speeding car wins
It should be quite clear, when someone is conversing. You misread it, man.
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I guess I'll show you (5)
just how our conversations (7)
are all being done. (5)
Sure, the game sounds fun, (5)
but someone could troll it easy. (8....WTF?!!!)
What would you do then? (5)
Ignore all "end" posts? (5)
I'll stick to just conversing. (7)
It's more fun to me. (5)
By the way, you guys, (5)
calling him SM sounds weird (7)
like some bondage shit. (5)
In that nickname thread, (5)
he mentioned something about (7)
being called just Shin. (5)
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For some reason just now,(6...You're slipping, Loli...))
I'm inspired to write this (7)
real haiku (with leaves!): (5)
Autumn, a warm breeze (5)
silent street, dance with the leaves (7)
a speeding car wins (5)
You try doing this (5)
with all of our posts thus far. (7)
You will see a trend. (5)
All my lines are right, (5)
Loli's missed three times so far. (7)
Loli's still a scrub. (5)
And on top of that, (5)
the meter is subtle, so (7)
you don't hear them versed. (5)
That is what I meant (5)
when I said to write as if (7)
you spoke normally. (5)
That is the level (5)
of the game I am playing. (7)
As I said... "I win." (5)
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Ah, I see it now. Thought it was that one, sorry. My apologies.
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Damn, I messed up twice just in that one single post? I'm shamed, but they're fixed. Excuse my errors. I wrote that post right after waking up today.
What was the other? Could you point it out sometime? I'll fix it as well.
Leaves burn really strong
In my brand new fire pit...
Screw your leaves, Loli.
This shit made me lol. I had to update my sig with that last line, Shin.
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What was the other? Could you point it out sometime? I'll fix it as well.
My style is subtle, (6)
but test them out and you'll see. (7)
My prose is legit. (5)
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Wow, i'm sitting here, just doing nothing at all. BAM, sudden nosebleed
It was so random. I havent had a nosebleed in like a long time
It was my new av :D Kyou is just so damn hot. We would make sweet love :fap:
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We've got machine guns
Grills, heaters, grenades, spiked balls
Everything must go!
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We've got machine guns
Grills, heaters, grenades, spiked balls
Everything must go!
Full mech is great fun
Ba ba ba, swords, and hammers
Where does she keep it?
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What was the other? Could you point it out sometime? I'll fix it as well.
My style is subtle, (6)
but test them out and you'll see. (7)
My prose is legit. (5)
Weird, I counted five. I thought style was read with only one syllable?
Hmm, I just checked it at Dictionary.com (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/style?&qsrc=). Seems like I was right. :psyduck:
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This guy looks legit. Come on, don't be a pussy. He's just a fairy
(note what im referencing)
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What was the other? Could you point it out sometime? I'll fix it as well.
My style is subtle, (6)
but test them out and you'll see. (7)
My prose is legit. (5)
Weird, I counted five. I thought style was read with only one syllable?
Hmm, I just checked it at Dictionary.com (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/style?&qsrc=). Seems like I was right. :psyduck:
Webster (http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/style) disagrees. According to the dictionary, it's two count.
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Shit just got real
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What was the other? Could you point it out sometime? I'll fix it as well.
My style is subtle, (6)
but test them out and you'll see. (7)
My prose is legit. (5)
Weird, I counted five. I thought style was read with only one syllable?
Hmm, I just checked it at Dictionary.com (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/style?&qsrc=). Seems like I was right. :psyduck:
Webster (http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/style) disagrees. According to the dictionary, it's two count.
Webster disagrees [5]
According to the diction [7?]
ary it(is) two count [5]
What is this shit shin
I thought you were haiku man
and never fuck up?
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Hello haiku thread
I'd like to share this with you
Try to guess the pose
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"Rape Shiki. Rape him.
Stick his penis in my vag
And rape him till dawn."
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What was the other? Could you point it out sometime? I'll fix it as well.
My style is subtle, (6)
but test them out and you'll see. (7)
My prose is legit. (5)
Weird, I counted five. I thought style was read with only one syllable?
Hmm, I just checked it at Dictionary.com (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/style?&qsrc=). Seems like I was right. :psyduck:
Webster (http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/style) disagrees. According to the dictionary, it's two count.
Webster disagrees [5]
According to the diction [7?]
ary it(is) two count [5]
What is this shit shin
I thought you were haiku man
and never fuck up?
It's just as you say. I wont make excuses, I wrote that purposely. Merely seventeen syllable count does not make a line a haiku; space each of the words as they should be. if the count is right, then you're good.
Webster (http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/style) disagrees. (5)
According to the dictionary, (8)
it's two count. (4)
It is read like this, but still, congrats on the catch. Thought I'd cheat a bit. I guess I should have expected that to happen after mouthing off.
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I was attempting to show my confusion over your lack of haiku
But it is all good, I've still fucked up more than you, so no huge deal sir.
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You've fucked more than him? Thats kind of a low comment :-[ haha just a yolk
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do not type haikus at two in the damn morning it is no bueno.
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"No es bueno," sir. You forgot that Spanish rule. Try to remember.
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Webster (http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/style) disagrees. According to the dictionary, it's two count.
Well, I'll accept that.
No single syllable 'style' for me, I guess.
Okay, next subject - Touhou Pocket Wars Evo! It's a doujin game based around Touhou (obviously) and plays like a card game (sort of). I enjoy it so much that I have started to translate simple things. Well, most of it is just inserting stuff that's seen prior translation. The game is easy to code monkey around in, so I'm like, "why not?" I would need major assistance to translate the main story's text though. Honestly, I could care less about the story's mass of dialog. I just want spellcard effect translations so I can play with ease, lol.
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Webster (http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/style) disagrees. According to the dictionary, it's two count.
Well, I'll accept that.
No single syllable 'style' for me, I guess.
Okay, next subject - Touhou Pocket Wars Evo! It's a doujin game based around Touhou (obviously) and plays like a card game (sort of). I enjoy it so much that I have started to translate simple things. Well, most of it is just inserting stuff that's seen prior translation. The game is easy to code monkey around in, so I'm like, "why not?" I would need major assistance to translate the main story's text though. Honestly, I could care less about the story's mass of dialog. I just want spellcard effect translations so I can play with ease, lol.
Let me take a look. I can decode my way through a bit of moonspeak. Plus, to top it off, this sounds like my type of game. Danmaku lolis. :fap:
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I'm only wannabe when it comes to translating Moonspeak. (But I gave it my best stab in the AACC thread.)
I'd love to actually fucking learn it, but for some reason, my college don't offer it.
But they offer SWAHILI.
There's no fuckin' justice in this world.
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Oh wow, Swahili?! WTF is up with that? You should teach yourself. Almost all of the Japanese that I have learned, I have taught myself.
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Yeah. Swahili, Traditional Chinese, and more of the usual stuff one can expect (German, French, Italian) but no Japanese. It sucks. I'd take it in a heartbeat.
I find it difficult to learn from tutes or CDs. That crucial human feedback is kind of lacking.
That said, I've heard a lot of people say good things about Rosetta Stone.
If you got any recommendations or anything, feel free to toss them my way.
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Oh wow, Swahili?! WTF is up with that? You should teach yourself. Almost all of the Japanese that I have learned, I have taught myself.
Really? How'd you do that?
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Yeah. Swahili, Traditional Chinese, and more of the usual stuff one can expect (German, French, Italian) but no Japanese. It sucks. I'd take it in a heartbeat.
I find it difficult to learn from tutes or CDs. That crucial human feedback is kind of lacking.
That said, I've heard a lot of people say good things about Rosetta Stone.
If you got any recommendations or anything, feel free to toss them my way.
Oh wow, Swahili?! WTF is up with that? You should teach yourself. Almost all of the Japanese that I have learned, I have taught myself.
Really? How'd you do that?
I couldn't say much on using Rosetta Stone. I've never used it. But for Japanese, I'd start with the alphabet, learn all the letters. Of course, that's basic. Here are two (http://www.freejapaneselessons.com/lesson02.cfm) sites (http://www.learn-japanese.info/) that I used when teaching myself. Install the Asia Language packs (http://newton.uor.edu/Departments&Programs/AsianStudiesDept/Language/asianlanguageinstallation_XP.html)on your computers. That will help too.
There's a program called "Translator Aggregator" (http://www.hongfire.com/forum/attachment.php?s=48fe0ee4b653a4f8fbc5ddcf62f29e3e&attachmentid=159424&d=1271103151) that can help translate; and for copying kanji, you can always use the IME pad. The IME pad is a tool in the options of the language pack. This is "easy mode" for translating Japanese, works for everyone, however you should pay attention to all the translations. Using this will help by giving you valuable vocabulary. Use the sites above for learning grammatical usage correctly.
But this will only get you so far with learning, books will help the rest. You can also chat with Japanese speakers like penpals or something. A lot of people in Japan also want to learn English as well; there's a site I'm on, "Japan a Radio" (http://www.japanaradio.com/), where you can meet people. Well, by "meet", I mean finding people online that want to learn as well. You can chat via IM, email, whatever works the best for you. This helps cover the human feedback part you miss from using programs.
That's just one option. You don't have to join the site if you don't want to. You can find someone on most message boards that can speak a bit of it, but some translators are dicks and they wont bother to help you out at all. Simply chatting in another language will help, you don't have to talk.
Finally, there's one more way I'd like to mention. Manga translations. Translating manga (particularly children's) will help you learn words. The most important thing with Japanese is the vocabulary. The sentence structure is based entirely on using nouns and verbs.
I dunno...maybe the Rosetta Stone might be easier, but like I said, I have never used it before. I hear it works well.
I was wondering...
Where is your 5-7-5?
Haiku thread, people?
Basically, learning (5)
Japanese is about you (7)
wanting to learn it. (5)
If you have the drive (5)
teaching yourself is easy. (7)
It just takes some time. (5)
If you mispronounce your words, people will likely help you out with it. But given that there that there is no one you can speak to, learning to reads fine. If you take classes, they will likely focus on reading anyways.
But back to business...Loli, I want a copy of this Touhou game. I don't mind helping with the translations...I want danmaku lolis.
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Japanese... That crucial human feedback is kind of lacking.
I had a very hilarious sexual conversation with a Japanese guy today at work. In front of the receptionist.
Best part was when we got onto the subject of "manko" and he mentioned "I like them" in English. I said I did too, and he goes, "because you have one".
Is that what you mean by human feedback? :V
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Partially. Although hopefully I would not be told that I have one. Last I checked, I didn't, and I don't exactly plan on adding one, either.
But by feedback I also mean things like making sure I'm getting the right pronounciation for a given kanji, right usage of the right kanji, right reading of it, and so on. For all intents and purposes, once you get the jouyou kanji drilled into your head, all that's left to learning Japanese is the grammatical structures and little nuances.
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This haiku thread is losing all of its haiku. I'm disappointed.
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A haiku topic with random /b/ quotations makes no sense at all.
I'm with Loli. If you get it.
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This haiku thread is losing all of its haiku. I'm disappointed.
I know what you mean. I'm kinda disappointed. Everyone else fails.
You and me, Loli. It seems we're the only one who care to haiku.
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Why, thank you Fabro. Hisui doujin or not, you're cool in my book.
Shin, it's funny though. See, I don't even have a degree in English, nor do I really have an interest in writing. This is just for fun.
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You won't believe it, but I eventually started the doujin.
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Hisui fans rejoice.
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You won't believe it, but I eventually started the doujin.
I don't believe it. There is no Hisui doujin. The doujin's a lie. :slowpoke:
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You're forgetting me, and all my contributions. Jeez, short memories.
Warm spring winds today
awaken the sleeping ones
from their long slumber.
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You won't believe it, but I eventually started the doujin.
That's phenominal! As usual, I'd love to see the work you've done.
You're forgetting me, and all my contributions. Jeez, short memories.
Shin and I haven't made an unmetered post yet. You, mister Pulse, have.
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Shin and I haven't made an unmetered post yet. You, mister Pulse, have.
I beg to differ. Shin has made a few of them, or rather, errors.
Here's Exhibit A:
Webster (http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/style) disagrees. According to the dictionary, it's two count.
Splitting words? That can't count, man.
Here's Exhibit B:
I was wondering who you were talking about with that SM name...I didn't realize that you were talking 'bout me. Feels kinda dirty... :-\
Five-Seven-Five, and then the word splitting happens. Shin fails it, sorry. LoliSauce has won, and so this silly metered post crap can end now.
Or keep on going, and eventually you'll miss, then nobody wins.
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(http://npshare.de/files/46715368/hisuidoh.PNG)
It would be awesome if the doujin was like this, but mouse drawing sucks.
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Shin and I haven't made an unmetered post yet. You, mister Pulse, have.
I beg to differ. Shin has made a few of them, or rather, errors.
Five-Seven-Five, and then the word splitting happens. Shin fails it, sorry. LoliSauce has won, and so this silly metered post crap can end now.
Or keep on going, and eventually you'll miss, then nobody wins.
I made mistakes too. It's not about winning or losing some big game. If we make mistakes, then we fix them. Just stay in meter all the time. Isn't that the point, and for that matter the fun, of this whole damn thread? Yeah, it's pretty tough to converse normally while pulling haiku shit, but hey, as long as this thread's still alive then I'm gonna stick to it.
Goddamn it Rowan. Your MSPaint drawings make me lol every time.
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Well that's the problem. This is not haiku really, it's just metered verse. There's a difference.
Maybe we should rename it? It would make more sense.
Congrats on 2k. Then again, I'm one-eighth there, so my life sucks too. :D
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Oh my fucking God.
Why is this still going on?
Y'all suck at haiku.
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Deal with it, good sir. It's not our fault if you can't, feel free to leave now.
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Oh good god, Fabro...Love your MSPaint drawings, that shit is the lols.
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You're forgetting me, and all my contributions. Jeez, short memories.
Shin and I haven't made an unmetered post yet. You, mister Pulse, have.
I also haven't made an unmetered post yet. Where is the love Sauce?
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You're forgetting me, and all my contributions. Jeez, short memories.
Shin and I haven't made an unmetered post yet. You, mister Pulse, have.
I also haven't made an unmetered post yet. Where is the love Sauce?
I'm sorry Cornix. I didn't mean to exclude you or the others. To apologize, I will IM you! ...er...would if you weren't away. =\
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Exclusionary... that sort of stuff's not cool, bro. Repent, and be saved!
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Seven syllables, "What is this I don't even" has them. them. them. them.
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You're forgetting me, and all my contributions. Jeez, short memories.
Shin and I haven't made an unmetered post yet. You, mister Pulse, have.
I also haven't made an unmetered post yet. Where is the love Sauce?
I'm sorry Cornix. I didn't mean to exclude you or the others. To apologize, I will IM you! ...er...would if you weren't away. =\
Lol I'm generally up pretty late, but 6am is pushing it. :P
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Lol I'm generally up pretty late, but 6am is pushing it. :P
But yeah I was out of town for a wedding posting from my phone yesterday.
Oh yeah, I forgot. You're East coast aren't you Cornix? lol, time difference.
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Lol I'm generally up pretty late, but 6am is pushing it. :P
But yeah I was out of town for a wedding posting from my phone yesterday.
Oh yeah, I forgot. You're East coast aren't you Cornix? lol, time difference.
Yes yes I am that, I missed your message last night, stupid full screen games.
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The thin threads of fate
are slowly fraying apart.
You are lost to me.
君消えた、
微熱のような、
縁の糸。
Bottom line kanji is read as "eni" instead of "enishi", to keep within 5-7-5.
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Two more on my way home from work.
We locked our fingers,
a promise made with pinkies,
"I'll love you, always."
I cannot return,
even if I could go back,
there is nothing left.
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Those are awfully depressing haiku, missy. Let that old shit go, and try cheering up. I hear that new happiness thing is contagious.
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Don't you remember?
You taught me to be stubborn.
Look, it's already begun.
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A wind is blowing
Dark clouds drift slowly away
Spring turns to summer
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It is 5 AM
Devastation opens soon
I should get some sleep.
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Sleepless all week long.
Girlfriend on four days this week.
Lack of internet.
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Searching for a job
while idling in cafés
is quite the madness
srsly
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The heart's labyrinth,
in darkness, confront yourself.
"Who am I, really?"
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Daughter's Last Words
by ~Scizormaster
A mother finds a book
Full of misery and pain
Daughter's Last Words
Pome from my DA
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Sounds kinda emo. Go out and smell the flowers, man. It's pretty nice.
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On a moonswept night
A handsome cat calls a taxi
Enter Deer Jousting