This is pretty much the Final version before going up on Mbread's channel or SRK
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hXIGHxJSx3U
Here we go. What do I need to do?
Typo at 2:58
"All these movements may
time time to learn to fully utilize..."
I think it's "take time"?
Also, in my opinion I think that the health bar should be highlighted at 5:30. The chip damage is kinda hard to notice. At 5:43 too. I know it's fairly obvious that the health bar is the subject matter at those times, but it'll look better if you highlighted it like when you explained what yellow and red health were. My unimportant opinion anyways.
With that said, maybe the Magic Circuit could be highlighted as well at 6:22 in case the viewer didn't really notice the meter draining.
At 6:28 you mention whiffing. I've met a few people who had to ask what whiffing meant, so perhaps you could clarify that. Maybe just change the sentence to "...from whiffing attacks, that is having a move completely miss".
At 6:38: "Arc Drives are one of your more powerful moves that are only
accessible conditions such as HEAT"
Perhaps it's "accessible under certain conditions such as when in HEAT"?
I also think that HEAT isn't explained very thoroughly. I hope it'll be in the later tutorials.
My thoughts.