yeah i can tell what you are trying to do just by looking and admittedly its just actually pretty hard to execute well
your second poster is a lot less wordy so its less of an issue here
i also didnt even know you guys had more sessions planned out cause it wasnt posted in a recent post, just edited into the original post
in terms of character choice, nero and ciel are pretty popular picks so maybe you should think of putting them in.
roa isnt portrayed very well here, warc seems redundant, archetype earth isnt even playable, tohno+nanaya is redundant
the real issue is ITS HARD TO READ
another problem i just thought of is that if you look at this poster and dont even know what melty blood is, you wont know what kind of game it is either